The person i admire is Yuri Gagarin.
Yuri Alekseyevich Gagarin was born on March 9, 1934, in a small village a hundred miles from Moscow. When Gagarin grew up and graduated school and continued studies at the industrial college in Saratov, concurrently took a course in flying. On completing this course, he entered the Soviet Air Force cadet school at Orenburg, from which he graduated in 1957. More than 200 Russian Air Force fighter pilots were selected as cosmonaut candidates. Gagarin, a 27-year-old senior lieutenant at the time, was among the pilots selected. On April 12, 1961 he take first flight in the history of mankind. Before the flight he said “Go” and then Gagarin traveled around the Earth once, reaching a maximum height of 327 kilometers. It was, probably, the most exciting and meaningful experience in 20 century and Gagarin made a huge contribution in development of science and technologies. So, we must thanks Gagarin for all things he did to our generate.
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The Beatles were an English rock band. It was formed in Liverpool in 1960. The members of the band were John Lennon, Paul McCartney, George Harrison and Ringo Star. Their rock compositions became famous all over the world. The Beatles were broken-up in 1970, but their songs are popular even today.
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(можно добавить: Sir Arthur)</span> Conan Doyle is a British writer, former physician and an author of numerous adventure books who was born in Britain. Conan Doyle wrote one of the most famous books in the world, (<= нужна запятая) "Sherlock Holmes", (<= нужна запятая) and came up with such interesting characters as Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson.
Agatha Christie is a writer who wrote (убрать артикль a) very famous detective stories, (<=нужна запятая) such as Jonah and The Secret Adversary.
I love to read adventure stories because I like them. You learn a lot of interesting and exciting things from a<span>dventure books (<= конструкция предложения была неправильной)</span>. When you read a book like that, you can travel with the book's heroes and live through the same events that happen to them. (<= конструкция была неправильной, надеюсь, ничего, что я чутка переписал))
I know a lot of adventure and detective books: (можно добавить: for example,) «Count of Monte Cristo», «Сaptain Nemo», «Three Musketeers», «Mousetrap». My favourite book is "Sherlock Holmes". The creator of this book is Arthur Conan Doyle (неправильно был указан автор), who is a very popular writer.