Боже, я извиняюсь, но нереально в 10-11 классе писать такую ахинею. Такую эссе-сочку мог написать и мой братик второклассник. Ну да ладно, не буду грузить. Я там текст совсем немного подправила, чтоб хоть звучало:
"This summer I and my family visited the campsite Utulic. We spent our time swimming, sunning, walking along the Baikal. There were disco for adults and also for children every evening.
Once we went to take a look at the Sobol mountain, which reaches a height of one thousand and four metres (1004 м) above sea level. It was really horribly, but awesome! After that my aunt Larisa invited us to the country house <span>(вместо country house можно просто dacha, country house посолидней звучит - <u>загородный дом)</u></span>. Here we ate a lot of juicy strawberry.
I have met many new friends in Utulic and enjoyed my rest.
I liked my holidays."
И перевод на всякий:
Этим летом я и мои родители посетили турбазу Утулик. Мы проводили время купаясь, загорая, гуляя вдоль Байкала. Каждый вечер здесь проводились дискотеки для взрослых, а также для детей.
Один раз мы отправились взглянуть на Соболиную гору, которая достигает (тут, автор, я вас поправлю - не 900мм, а 1004 м!) одна тысяча четырех метров над уровнем моря. Это было действительно страшно, но все-же замечательно! После этого тетя Лариса пригласила нас к себе на дачу. Там мы поели много сочной клубники.
Я встретил много новых друзей в Утулике и наслаждался отдыхом.
Мне понравились мои каникулы.
Точность перевода и отсутствие ошибок гарантирую. Была рада помочь!
Our ancestors - the clones of aliens?
Ufologists of Alexin (Tula region), have developed their own opinion on the emergence of human civilization. Mankind was not a monkey. Our ancestors, in their opinion - the clones alien creatures. Artifacts - the main evidence of the hypothesis aleksintsev. A few years ago they started excavations on the territory of their district. During this time, ufologists found several stones on which you can see pictures of animals, people's faces or chimeras. Version of the natural origin of these drawings UFO experts reject. Ufologists believe that these findings belong Paleolithic era. So, even at this time in the Tula region were people or clones of another civilization. Representatives of humanoids still protect their children - are living in a parallel universe, but only show photographic lenses. Ufologist Sergei Zverev managed to make some shots where, in his opinion, the outlines of the space dish. Confirmation of his hypothesis ufologists found in the writings of the Tibetan Lama. On their laurels, they are not going to stay and are already thinking about the upcoming season of archaeological excavations. That's just far enough supporters and sponsors at all.
Habitable planets could be anywhere
Astrophysicists say that one in four planetary systems outside our solar system may well be the seat of another land. Researchers from Princeton University decided that the race for new planets takes too much time. Therefore, instead of scanning the heavens, they modeled the planetary systems found so far, to find out which of them can hide life. After spending 85 simulation systems known in August 2002, Serge Tabachnik and Kristen Menou found that a quarter of these systems is an area where there might be planets that could support life. This is much more than previously thought, which means life in the galaxy can be found almost everywhere. In each of the systems, researchers looked at the following things: whether Earth-like planets exist in a stable orbit, rather they are removed from the gas giants, and if they are in the "habitable zone", ie area in which the world can be liquid water at any time. Вот, промт творит чудеса.
Відповідь: У тебя правильно пишет )))
Пояснення:
Если глагол то, ярко осветить.
2.a 3-years-old child has been taken to the hospital after a serious fall yesterday.
3. The money have being raised for the baby's operation in the usa.
4.the planet has being destroyed by pollution.
5.the treasure has been discovered in the old lady's garden.
6.no cameras are allowed in the museum.
7.animals are being used to test beauty products.
8. The rare picasso painting will be exhibited in the national gallery next monday.
9.tom cruise was asked to sponsor charity event yesterday.