По моему правильно. Там все слова правильные я проверил кое где.
Almaty - comfortable city with beautiful buildings, wide streets and a variety of parks, gardens and fountains. In Almaty, a large number of attractions attracting visitors to the city.
Это буква джей (не дзей), но в слове эта буква произносится как "дж"
-hello, my friend! How are you?
-I'm great!
-Really? What happened?
-I decided to visit London!
-Oh, my God! It's cool! I know that it's city of your blue dream!
-Yes. I'm so happy. My parents bought tikets for me and my brother.
-You are lucky girl.
_I know. It is the largest and most populated city in the United Kingdom and the European Union.
-What sights do you want to see?
-Trafalgar Square,Albert Memorial and Royal Albert Hall,the National Gallery and others.
-I know that there are many parks in this city.
-Ye!
The largest parks in the central area of London are the Royal Parks of
Hyde Park, its neighbour Kensington Gardens at the western edge of
central London and Regent's Park on the northern edge.
-Do you want to visit Zoo?
-Of cause) Regent's Park contains London Zoo, the world's oldest scientific zoo.
-I'm so happy for you! You should take many fotos!
-Yes) I will buy something special for you in London!
-Thanks! Good luck!
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