В тексте очень много ошибок, в основном в употреблении "it", во многих местах его просто не должно быть, в других нужен артикль. проверьте правильность
1. I (am) Peter. 2. He (is) John. 3. We (are) friends. 4. My mother (is) a doctor. 5. Her father (is) a teacher. 6. You (are) here. 7. They (are) pupils. 8. Mary (is) a clever girl. 9. Nick (is) a poet. 10. This baby (is) funny.
Winter holidays are shorter than summer ones. They begin at the end
of December and last about two weeks. It is so nice to have a rest from
school.During winter holidays we celebrate the New Year’s Eve and Christmas.
There are New Year parties for children at schools and theatres.
Cinemas show children films and cartoons. It is usually very cold in winter, but frost and snow can’t keep
children indoors. It’s so great to go skiing down a hill. Boys like to
play hockey on the ice. Many children go to the skating-rinks to skate.
Small children play snowballs and make snowmen, or ride on the sledges
happily.When the weather is bad, I stay at home and watch TV. There is always
something interesting on during winter holidays. Sometimes my friends
come to see me and we play computer games or listen to music. There is
also more time for reading, drawing, making model planes and other
hobbies.Holidays pass quickly and soon it’s time to go to school again.
Must : polite, listen to the teacher, friendly, come to school on time. mustn't : be late for school, miss lessons, use mobile.
Если надо в прошедшем, типа "боб сказал...", а не "боб говорит..", то вот:
1. Bob said that he liked milk
2 jim asked where you had gone
3 nelly asked if you would sing a song at the party
4 sofie asked jack to clean the room
5 polly said that she couldn't play badminton