My school day starts at 2 pm. So, I have a chance to sleep in the morning and make all the homework after my breakfast. Actually I try to do my homework the day before in the evening so that to have some spare time in the morning. Sometimes I need some time for extra activities- (I go in for sports or I go to the music school). My school day usually ends at 7 pm. I go home by bus,- it usually takes 25 minutes. After the meal with my family I go to my room, do my homework or watch tv. Usually I go to bed at 10 pm.
<span>The most important </span>"first time"<span> for me was when I learned how to drive a motorbike. It was very important for me because all my friends were using it and I couldn't. My friends were laughing at me because I had some problems with <span>starting the engine</span> of the vehicle so I was nervous and when I finally did it I didn't know what to do and it turned off. My friend showed me once again how to do it and after a few minutes I already knew how to <span>start the engine</span>. The next steps in my driving lessons were easy so I learned very fast almost everything. Finnaly my friend said that i should try to drive on my own. I was scared but I said "ok". I started the engine once again and I just started to drive I was shocked but i felt realy great. He was trying to run after me but I was driving too fast and when I realisedI was so far I turned back and drove back to him. After that I was very proud and I wanted to do that again but it was late so he gave me a lift to home. That day was awsome.</span>
В основом все правильно, но не надо добавлять very и к Fruit надо добавить s. Также Richard с большой буквы
Ты знаешь, я люблю Рождество. Я хочу рассказать тебе, как мы отметили этот праздник. Мы отправили много поздравительных открыток нашим друзьям. Ты получил нашу открытку? Мы нарядили прекрасное Рождественское дерево и купили много подарков. Моя мама сделала огромный торт. Она приготовила индейку. Мы пригласил наших друзей и получилась очень веселая вечеринка. Мы надели веселые костюмы. Они были прекрасны. Мы пели песни, танцевали и играли в игры. В 12 мы дарили подарки. Мне очень понравился праздник!