Question

Кто-нибудь проверьте правильно ли я написала. ПОЖАЛУЙСТА!!! The picture shows a girl. She is in a white t-shirt. Sun is very bright. The weather is warm and pleasent. There is the sea. The breeze is blowing, and the girls hair waving in diferent directions. Girl enjoys the weather.

Answer 1

There is a girl in the picture- вместо The picture shows a girl. She is wearing a white T-shirt.(The) sun is very bright. There is (a) sea. The breeze is blowing and the girls hair (is) waving.  (The) girl enjoys the weather.   
Не совсем понятно, сначало на картинке речь идет об одной девочке, а волосы развиваютя у нескольких и только одной девочки нравится погода. Сколько всего девочек?

Answer 2

Photo shows a girl . She is wearing a white T-shirt. The sun is very bright . The weather is warm and pleasant. Suschestvuetmore . The wind blows ivolosy girl waving in Diferent directions. Girl enjoying the weather.