Question

Ребят помогите пожалуйста,очень срочно нужно!!! Написать сочинение(должно быть 5 абзацев).
Это тема:
Some people think that professional sport is too traumatic to be healthy, too demanding to be combined with good education and getting adequate social experience for children and teenagers to practice.

Answer 1

Some people consider professional sport too traumatic and demanding. However, there is a possibility to develop your stamina and spirit doing it. This essay will examine pros and cons of professional sport.
The most important feature is that it the sport develops you as a personality. It trains your stamina, inculcates the feeling of responsibility and makes you capable of protecting other people. Moreover, professional sport integrates you into the real world situation which makes you competitive. This feature is absolutely vital in contemporary society.
However, professional sport may result in may injuries, which may have long-term effects. It may even make you disable, however, this scenario is not particularly  likely to happen. This is also very time-consuming and you may be forced to sacrifised your high-quality education in order to be a professional sportsman - this is an opportunity cost. And the chances are that you may become not a very successful sportsman with no opportunity to find a proper job. Of course, everuthing depends on what type of person you are and  what kind of talent you possess. So there is a great risk to become a wreck of a life.
Still, if you are determined and you have no hesitations about your success and you have a genuine passion to do sports, there are no possible reasons which may stop you from being who you want to be. And being very successful in what you do.
To my mind, education is not as important as happiness. And it's worth  doing want want and try what you want and not waste time on side things which will finally have no difference to you.
Можно ещё что-нибудь где-нибудь прибавить, ну, или вообще по-другому написать...