1) Fern said to her mother - не "said to", a "asked".
2) ax - такого слова нет, зато есть слово "axe".
3) to kill is a runt pig - "is" - лишнее.
4) A girl of eight years - правильнее будет написать "A eight years old girl".
5) seared - может быть "scared"?
6) ran for his father - "girl" - женский род, а потому не "his", a "her".
7) Fern said to not kill it, please - "please" - лишнее.
8) would have - правильно использовать "had" (без "would").
9) said she went back to the house - 1) "said that she went". 2) "back into the house".
10) and he would bring the runt - "and that he would...".
11) Arable pig brought into the house, he was a newborn and white - "When Arable brought the pig into the house, it was newborn and white".
12) The father said he than belongs to Fern - "The father said that it belongs to Fern".
13) Girl - "The girl".
14) She looked at him and said that he was perfect - "She looked at it and said that it was perfect".
ЗАДАНИЕ
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1 If we turn off lights when we don"t need them we'll save energy.
2 If I had money,I would adopt a panda.
3 If I were you, I would join an environment group.
4 If people didn't throw rubbish everywhere, our city would be cleaner.
5 If all of us recycle, we'll have a cleaner planet.
ЗАДАНИЕ 2
If you eat more vegetables you'll be a lot healthier.
If I were you I would walk whenever and wherever I could.
If you stopped eating before going to bed you would feel better.
You'll be healthy if you sleep 9-10 hours every night.
What were you doing when it began raining?
He bought this car last month.
They were watching the film when it happened.
1.Then I...home and go to school.
2.I get up at quarter to seven in the morning... dressed and have breakfast.
3.In the afternoon,I have dinner at eight o clock.
4.In the afternoon,I go home at quarter past three.
5Then I...a snack and do my homework.