1) Fern said to her mother - не "said to", a "asked".
2) ax - такого слова нет, зато есть слово "axe".
3) to kill is a runt pig - "is" - лишнее.
4) A girl of eight years - правильнее будет написать "A eight years old girl".
5) seared - может быть "scared"?
6) ran for his father - "girl" - женский род, а потому не "his", a "her".
7) Fern said to not kill it, please - "please" - лишнее.
8) would have - правильно использовать "had" (без "would").
9) said she went back to the house - 1) "said that she went". 2) "back into the house".
10) and he would bring the runt - "and that he would...".
11) Arable pig brought into the house, he was a newborn and white - "When Arable brought the pig into the house, it was newborn and white".
12) The father said he than belongs to Fern - "The father said that it belongs to Fern".
13) Girl - "The girl".
14) She looked at him and said that he was perfect - "She looked at it and said that it was perfect".
1. It’s their problem, not ours.
2. This is a nice camera. Is it yours?
3. That’s not my umbrella. Mine is black.
4. Whose books are these? Yours or mine?
5. Catherine is going out with her friends this evening.
6. My room is bigger than hers.
7. They’ve got two children but I don’t know their names.
8. Can we use your washing machine? Ours is broken.
-Смотрите, дети! Самолет из Австралии!
-Harry! Дядя Harry там!
-Как он выглядит?
-Он высокий, стройный. У него светлые волосы.
-Он наш любимый дядя, Nanny. Он ветеринар и очень веселый!
-Смотрите, это он!
-Привет! Это твоя тетя Pam и кузин Robbie.
-Добро пожаловать в Англию!
-Это твои вещи?
-Да! У меня их очень много! Смотри!
-Вау! У тебя очень много животных, дядя Harry!
If she didn't go to bed too late, she wouldn't be tired all the time.