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Dear Dan
Sorry for not having answered. I was too much busy with school. It is so cool that you can play the guitar. Unfortunately i do not know how to play the guitar and i'm not in the composition of any rock group. But we have music lessons where we sing songs. I like to sing songs. I adore the songs from the television show "Glee". In this series, the actors perform well-known songs around the world. Did you hear about this show? I think if you like different music, then you should watch it. I adore to rock. Classical music i do not like. Who is your favourite singer in rock? I will waint for you next letter.You friend,Roman



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Мне не понравилось выражение in the composition of any rock group. мне кажется это слово здесь ни к месту, нужно поискать другой синоним.

the actors perform well-known songs around the world  - здесь нужно изменить порядок слов the actors performed songs well-known around the world

I adore to rock ( не совсем уверенна на счет to, никогда не встречала этот предлог с этим словом, хотя точно не уверена, оно придает какой-то другой оттенок слову.
Classical music i do not like. правильно i do not like classical music.

singer in rock правильно rock singer

waint - wait