I think that SH is the most famous detective in the world. He is [not only] the part of our culture, [but also represents all great things of his country]. For many people he is even the most typical example of an English character. His museum at 221b, BS is very popular and [people all over the world visit it every day].
Исправил ошибки, написал более-менее красиво ))
Если покороче - вычеркни что-нибудь, например то, что я взял в квадратные скобки.
on this picture i can see a lot of people.
A girl, who's singing the song.
A funny cat with boy
two candles on the table
and a big, maybe tasty сake
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