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Postcard to my friend

Dear ********

Here we’re in Dubai having a great time. The weather is hot. We’re staying in the seven star hotel Burj Al Arab. Hotel is the best and it is built in the form of a sail. There are 60 floors and we are living in a luxe room , which is located on the 55th floor. We have got a wonderful view of the sea from our bedroom. Yesterday we went to the highest building in the world to Burj Khalifa. We went up to observation deck, which is located on the 148th floor. When we saw to the Dubai from observation deck, we were surprised. Here it has an amazing view to the Dubai. Then went to the restaurant “Atmosphere” and we had lunch. Restaurant is located on the 122th floor. It was nice, romantic, the food was delicious and had a brilliantly view to the town. At 6 p.m. o’clock we left the world’s tallest building. Then we went see fountain show of Dubai. It located near of Burj Khalifa. There were a lot of people. But we saw a dancing fountain from 7:00p.m. till 10:00p.m. It turns out this fountain , one of the largest and highest in the world It was amazing show and beautiful day.

Today we’re going to the beach. We want to relax from noisy city.

Tomorrow we will walk around the city in Rollis-Royse. I’m waiting for tomorrow day.

After tomorrow we will fly back to Kazakhstan.

See you soon!

Answer 1

1) Перестрой предложение: We're having a great time in Dubai.
2) We're staying in the Burj Al Arab hotel, which has 7 stars. This is the best hotel and it's form reminds me of a boat. (Так будет получше)
3) Luxe room замени на luxe suite.
4) ... we saw Dubai....
5) Замени "Here it has an amazing view..." на Up from here Dubai has an amazing view.
6) ... had a lunch.. (артикль забыл)
7)... the food was delicious and the view on the town was brilliant. (лучше так сказать)
8) Then we went TO see THE fountain show. (без of Dubai)
9) It IS located.... of-не нужно тут
10) This is the largest and the highest fountain in the world.
11) Не walk, а ride