1. Do you put marks in your diary?
2. Do you wear a school uniform (Там не "at"(в), а "a" т.е. Школьная форма, а не униформа в школе)
3. Do you have breaks after every lesson? (В лучшем решении пропущено)
4. Do you get marks in letters?
I become surprised when I get five at the lesson.
I'm go to the park now.
I feel happy.
My friend run in the forest.
I take an interest in sport.
I think teenagers need pocket money. Start with the fact that they needed something to move and pay for transportation. In the second to last the entire day at school, they must eat, and therefore pay for lunch in the dining room. I would like to receive daily a minimum of 9$. Of course saving money is a good idea. Saving money, you can put them on those things that you want to buy. And besides, I consider it a great pleasure to buy something you need with great discount and spent less than planned.
17 - years, when he started to sell his products.
150 - number of stores.
2005 - in this year was a record of new stores.
6000 - quantity of customers who visited new store midnight opening.
17.3 - billion euros, totall sales in 2006.
По-моему скромному мнению, текст похож на один из IELTS текстов))
(это) очень здорово! правда!