Question

Помогите исправить ошибки при переводе: Однажды я возвращался домой с друзьями после дня рождения. время было около 11 вечера, было уже темно. Нам пришлось идти через лес. Чем дальше мы уходили от дороги, тем гуще и темнее он становился. Хотя мы ходили туда каждый день и знали все в лесу очень хорошо, но ночью все равно было страшно. И когда мы проходили через небольшую поляну, мы услышали громкий шорох в кустах. На несколько секунд все молчали и остановился. Но потом мы заметили, что между деревьями недалеко от нас, есть человек. Когда он пошел к нам, мы не сговариваясь, бросились врассыпную. Я вернулся домой через час и сразу же лег спать. На следующий день я узнал, что двое моих друзей бродили в лесу до утра, и снова увидел этого человека. А в вечерних новостях сказали, что в лесу нашли труп мужчины.
Перевод: One day I was returning home with friends after a day of birth. time, it was about 11 pm, it was already dark. We had to go through the forest. The farther we went off the road, the thicker and darker it became. Although we went there every day and knew everything in the forest is very good, but at night still felt frightened. And when we passed through a small clearing, we heard a loud rustling in the bushes. For a few seconds all were silent and stopped. But then we noticed that between the trees not far from us, there is a man. When he went toward us we are not saying a word, had to scatter. I returned home an hour later and immediately went to bed. The next day I learned that two of my friends were wandering in the forest until the morning, and again saw the man. And on the evening news they said that in the forest found the corpse of a man.

Answer 1

One day I was returning home with friends after a day of birth. It was about 11 pm, it was dark already. We had to go through the forest. The further we went off the road, it became thicker and darker. Although we went there every day and knew that all in this forest was very good, but at night we still felt fear. And when we passed through a small glade, we heard a loud rustling in the bushes. Everything was being quite for a few seconds. But then we noticed that between the trees not far from us, was a man. When he went towards us we were not saying a word, had to scatter. I returned to home an hour later and immediately went to bed. The next day I learned that two of my friends were wandering in the forest until the morning, and again saw the man. On the evening news leading said that in the forest found the corpse of a man.