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I have some pets. I have a cat. It is ginger color with some strips. His name is Tary. He is fat and lazy, but kind and gentle. I have six fish. There are two catfishs and four neon. They are very funny and fast. I can watch it for hours. I love my pets so much.
Инглиш? Тогда могу помочь. Полагаю, и класс невысокий. 5 простейших предложений:
I want to tell you about my neighbour Salem.He is an old man with a grey beard. His flat is very close to ours and we hear him shouting sometimes. He loves football very much and watches every match on TV, but Salem is a very kind person and we live in friendship.
Надеюсь, помог, спрашивайте, если нужна помощь! Удачи!
Ответ:He came to London at13h June and left again on September.2They went out at half past one;they'll be back at ten minutes.3He plays cricket on summer and football on winter.4He always leaves early at the morning and comes back late at night.5.He rest at the weekend's but works hand on Monday on Friday.6.He was born at nineteenth century.7.I am working at six o'clock Friday evening.8.He's busy until presents.He'll see you at 30 minutes time.
