Question

Прочитайте задание и проверьте мое написание текста, если можите то, что-то добавьте.

Cl You have20 minutes to do this task.

You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Ben.

I've found that almost everyone in my class is preparing for entrance exams to a university. And what are you going to do after graduating from school? Have you made up your mind about your future career yet? Are you going to follow in your parents' footsteps? What influences your choice most of all?... Write him a letter and answer his questions.
Write 80 - 100 words. Remember the rules of letter writing

решение

Each person has a very hard and difficult path. And everyone is trying to overcome this way because in the future awaits him great happiness.
After high school, I'm going to go to college and then to university. I'm preparing for exams. Just try to make good grades in the certificate, and even I began to think about their future profession. I want to become an accountant. And this choice affects my goal to achieve something in life. Parents approve of my choice

Answer 1

"in the future awaits him great happiness" - прямой порядок слов (great happiness awaits him), after THE high school - артикль обязателен, just try to make good grades как-то не очень сказано... а остальное ничего.