This is my caterpillar.Its name is Greeny because it's green.It is made of paper .Greeny lives in the apple-tree and it is very happy to eat tasty apples every day.It has big eyes,a big mouth and a long body.It hasn't got any legs.Greeny has got small antennae on the head.I think you like it.
Hello my dear friend.
Now I am in London. There are too many place to visit and too many things to do. At this moment I am going to the Piccadilly Circus (главная площадь Лондона). I like this place because there is good sunny weather and so many good peoples.
With best wishes.
Your friend, (ваше имя).
Maybe Harry Potter is pretty boy whose can make magic.He has got dark hair and blue eyes.Harry is brave>generous and kind boy.I like him
1) positive: heartwarming, well acted, lots of twists and turns, too long, very suprising, gripping, original.
2) negative: too long, a bit boring, predictable.